Just got home and my tummy is acting up. I’ll have to put off working out for a few hours to give it time to settle down. Daddy and Tat are hanging out at her place tonight. Tat and I had a great time dancing last night but we only stayed an hour at the Conduit. They stopped playing good music so we left. We stopped by Kat Mandu but didn’t stay. They were playing good music but the atmosphere was a tad intimidating what with the 21 y.o.’s hanging out and two dance floor plus bar. I think maybe on another night it’ll work out better. Maybe next weekend. We’ll see. I was just proud of us for going. 
I did a small revision on my Prologue and upped the word count slightly as reflected below. I’m really thrilled about it and my mom is ecstatic. She knew I use to want to be a writer but thought I’d given up on it. She’s so happy I’m writing and have a book in the works.
I was thinking about things on the drive home and I may have a problem. It seems that Ash wants her own voice in the book. Kielee is still being a shy figure and I might know why. It’s possible they are twins separated at birth…Ash more succubus, Kielee more human. This would really account for a lot of things that seem to be coming to light and it’s not a bad thing but then…who’s my voice for the series and how to I write them both in without making it very confusing for the reader.
As I thought I kept coming back to thinking it was going to be hard to get across some things that needed to be said for Ash without Kielee being around. And I’m not sure I want to go to 3rd person for the whole book to have to do it. I can’t think of any books off hand that share the voice between two prime characters who both speak in 1st person. And I don’t believe Ash will settle for being the voice of the 2nd book.
I wondered if maybe I should eliminate Kielee but she made a small case for needing to remain in the mix so that won’t work. Which is why I’m wondering if twins will work. Ash is working on being more human and less evil/negative that Kie can help with…and Kielee seriously needs a dose of wildness added to her that Ash can help provide.
So now I just need to decide if I can share the book between them and not confuse everyone in the process. Thoughts?
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